A blog for the book IMPERFECT: a poetry anthology for middle schoolers about mistakes
How can we make the most of useful mistakes and do our best to fix the ones that need fixing? Poetry can help us figure it out.
Friday, May 25, 2018
Christy Mihaly
Some mistakes have big repercussions. IMPERFECT poet Christy Mihaly wrote a poem for the Team Imperfect blog about a military mistake:
The men who celebrated
became inebriated,
their stomachs fully sated,
oblivious to threats;
then in their camp at Trenton
commenced their slow descent in-
to sleep, in this event in
our early history.
[The mistake-makers here are the Hessian soldiers camped at Trenton, NJ, who celebrated Christmas a little too hard as General George Washington and his troops crossed the Delaware River to attack them, Dec. 25-26, 1776, in a great victory for the Continental Army.]
CHRISTY MIHALY writes in Vermont at a pine table overlooking forests and fields. The activities in those fields inspired her first picture book, HEY, HEY, HAY! (A Tale of Bales and the Machines that Make Them), illustrated by Joe Cepeda (Holiday House, 2018). Christy is a member of the Poets' Garage, an online community of people who write verse for children. As a founding member of GROG, the group blog for writers and readers of children’s literature, Christy blogs about books and the writing life. She also creates ELA exercises for an online educational company, which is great writing practice and pays better than poetry. She has published articles, stories, activities, and poetry in children's magazines. Her poem for writers, "Muse," appeared in the SCBWI Bulletin in 2014. She has, in addition, amassed a tall stack of rejections.
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Oh sigh, I have made the overeating mistake before for sure! Fortunately not in the midst of battle.
ReplyDeleteGood thing for GW and his troops that the Hessians made this mistake!
ReplyDeleteLove the way you rhyme with Trenton, Christy! Well done!!
Creative rhyming here and a history lesson, too! Well done!
ReplyDeleteWell, I guess we can be glad of some mistakes--or at least generals who can take advantage of them!
ReplyDeleteI love this book and all the great poems about mistakes. Thanks for joining the PF link up. The combination of history, humor, and rhyme delight me in this poem.
ReplyDeleteLove the history that unwinds so naturally in your poem!
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